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Among all the highlighted topics, one is "It's not clever to draw a conclusion quickly when you see or hear something at the first time." I can not endorse it any more.While, everyone's standpoint varies. Some person deem it indisputable that we can't just see the profile of anything we meet.It's more crucial to seek their inner information. Nevertheless, inversly, another part of people object this view. They consider that they can draw right conclusions if they enhance their capacity of acquirting right information. To my way of thinking, to begin with, inevitably, in the twenty-first centry with rapid development of scinece and technology, combined with economic condition, the acquisition of information may become the critical fators determining whether you are an achiever or not, no matter what field you're in. In addtion, ditinctly, we are able to do better if we check the problems complantly.Hence, both the capacity of acquirting information and the caitious attitude in traitened cirumstances play a significant role in our life.
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