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With the remarkable improvement of the Internet techniques, an increasing number of people are more likely have relationships through the Internet. So the Internet has a great influence on people's life. The Internet plays a positive role on interpersonal communication especially in the corporate world.To begin with, there are a great diversity of SNA(Social Networking Severcise), such as Facebook, QQ and Weichat. We can build the trust and communication through these. It is very convenient and efficient. In addition, the internet can support many kinds of information that we need. This information can improve our work skills, organizational skills and interpersonal skills in a team, all of which are critical for our professional growth and interpersonal communication. Last but not least, the impact of the Internet on international communication has an important meaning. To sum up, in modern society, using the Internet to improve the interpersonal communication is an irresistible trend.
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