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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46241
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。

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Why Do We GO To School As we can see from the picture that a kid comes up with a question that why am I going to school if my phone knows everything. As we as all know, with the remarkable improvement of people's living standard, more and more children have mobile phone. Therefore , due to the phone gives them much, they ask this question. But if we really don't go to school after having a phone? As far as I am concerned, there is no double that children must go to school. Why it ? In that school can enable children acquire knowledge and skills, also them can learn how to get along with others and so on. While by contrast ,if the phone also can do these. Obviously, the answer is no. The phone just could tell the result to children . Children can learn little thins too. In a word,the kids need go to school and the phone can't replace school.

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