Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Why Do We GO To School As we can see from the picture that a kid comes up with a question that why am I going to school if my phone knows everything. As we as all know, with the remarkable improvement of people's living standards, more and more children have mobile phones. Therefore, due to the phone gives them much, they ask this question. But if we really don't go to school after having a phone? As far as I am concerned, there is no double that children must go to school. Why it is? In that school can let children acquire knowledge and skills, also them can learn how to get along with others and so on. While by contrast ,if the phone can also do these. Obviously, the answer is no. The phone just could tell the result to children. Children can learn little thins too. In a word,the kids need go to school and the phone can't replace the school.