文章层次较为清晰;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;文章词汇不够丰富,但单词拼写要认真检查。
I have a good friend and her name is Kelly. We know each other for a long time because she was my classmate since ten years ago. I have not been seen her for five years and I miss her very much. At that time,we were classmate in a class. We often study together; have lunch togehter;play together and live together. There was the funny thing I just remember. one everning,