文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;从句和复杂句用的不错,但部分句子还有一些小问题;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
As the old sayings goes consider seriously first and then take anctions,which means olny by exactly arrangement can we accomplish everything successfully.However,it’s thought-provoking that people nowadays are increasingly ancious to come to conclusion because they thought saving time is important.If we try to get rid of something by just hearing or seeing,it's easily for us to get into wrong conclusion which seems unwise indeed. Therefore,we should change our way if we want to get the right conclusion.As far as I'm concerned,we can do as follows:On the one hand,we need to judge by ourselves which message is true and which is not,and then to absorb the true part while abandon the fause part.On the other hand,practice is the mather of truely,so we should take things into actions to get the right answers.What's more,if we can,doing some sceientific research,using the data to saying is much more convinced.
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