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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40881
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇表达较恰当,高级词汇表达灵活;作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用。

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AS we can see from the theme,the objects no matter what you have seen or what you have hear may not intelligent to draw the conclusions immediately.Obviously ,it is a wise thought! Notwithstanding as the proverbs goes:hearing may be fake,seeing could be true,whatever you see and hear still requires logical judgement.For instance,when you put a pencil int a glass which be filled with water,from the outside angels you may see the pencil may break ,but the truth is not.Our vision can tell lies.As for hearing, when someone makes an judgement on another person,he may put some subjective thoughts in it,but you certainly can not define that person just like what you have been told.And it is a previous experience for you to deal with the relatiobship with people surroundings. From the concern above, we are not supposed to draw a conclusion at once after hear or see something.

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