文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;全文结构较为严谨;作者可适当增加词汇的丰富度,部分句子有错误。
I have a good friend and her name is Kelly. We know each other for a long time because she was my classmate since 2000. I have not been seen her for five years so I miss her very much. At that time,we were classmate in a class. We often study together; have lunch together;play together and live together. There was the funny thing I just remember. One everning,