语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;句法知识扎实,可适当增加长句的使用;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累。
As we can see from the theme,the objects no matter what you have seen or what you have hear may not be intelligent to draw the conclusions immediately.Obviously ,it is a wise thought! Notwithstanding as the proverbs goes:hearing may be fake,seeing could be true,whatever you see and hear still requires logical judgement.For instance,when you put a pencil int a glass which is filled with water,from the outside angels you may see the pencil may break ,but the truth is not.Our vision can tell lies.As for hearing, when someone makes a judgement on another person,he may put some subjective thoughts in it,but you certainly can not define that person just like what you have been told.And it is a previous experience for you to deal with the relationship with people surroundings. From the concern above, we are not supposed to draw a conclusion at once after hearing or seeing something.
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