语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误。
we can often see these problems: Some of them reverse walking and chasing when go home, some of them ride a bicycle with people and talk to them loudly, some of them even ride into the motorway. Most of reason of these behaviors is the lack of security awareness of the performence, for our high school students, learn to control ourselves is the important thing. For example, we should deceleration when we see a vehicle, it is too dangerous for us to walk quickly at this time, then we should always remember: walk when the green light, stop when the red light. Last, it is better for us to go on crosswalk. thank you