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The Main Difference Between My College Life and My Middle School Life It's interesting to note that high school and college are generally described as "hell"and"heaven".According to a recent survey,2 factors contribute to this reaction:curriculum and campus activities. With entrance exams ahead,high school students,especially in junior 3 and senior 3,have a tight schedule:8 classes to attend during the day,and often there are another 2 in evening.At the end of the day,many feel as if their heads are going to split at any moment.Extracurricular activities can hardly find their way into such a schedule.If a student happens to see a poster for a singing contest,or a basketball match,to his or her disappointment it is often out-of-date. By contrast,at college students have fewer classes,with an average of 5 or 6 per day.Therefore,as long as they do not have classes,once in a while,especially on a cold morning,they can linger in bed and take their time getting up.Occasionally they can also visit a place of interest on a free weekday.Moreover,college offers students a rich variety of activities,ranging from costume parties to learned lectures.Many students are engaged in campus clubs and societies.So college students have far more time and opportunities to develop in an all-round way than they had in high school.