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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71648
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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If my forieign friend come to Nantong city where I inhabited, I'd like to meet him or her to airport or busstop, make a outgoing schedule ahead ,choose a good location hotel from which can overview the scene of the city. I'll take him to a few museums, parks and the famous wolfhill.History of the city and improvement and migration of city story are in our native museum. Many games facilities and greens characterristic plants in the parks.Wolfhill,but no wolf,only nearly two hundred metres .It is a famous religion small hill where have many people to there to pray for their close relatives and good friends. Of course, food is necessity. Nantong is a city by changjiang river and yellow sea, so multipal fantastic materials from river and sea are good meals by cooking. Offer good arrange of eat,lodging,and outgoing can gaze the pleasant of the guest.Yes,it is.

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