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I have a good friend and her name is Kelly. We know each other for a long time because she was my classmate since 2000. I have not been seen her for a long time. You see,I miss her very much. At that time,we were classmate in a class. We often study together; have lunch together;play together and live together. There was the funny thing I just remember. One Sunday morning, she came to see me when I finished my homework." Hey, Apple" She said " I brought two tickets for film, would you like to go to cinema with me ?" " Sure, I'd love to, wait for a moment, I need to bring my glasses".