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If my foreign friend comes to Nantong city where I inhabited, I'd like to meet him or her to airport or bus-stop, make an outgoing schedule ahead ,choose a good location hotel from which can overview the scene of the city. I'll take him to a few museums, parks and the famous wolf-hill.History of the city and improvement and migration of city story are in our native museum. Many games facilities and greens characteristic plants in the parks.Wolf-hill,but no wolf,only nearly two hundred metres .It is a famous religion small hill where have many people to there to pray for their close relatives and good friends. Of course, food is always something of necessities. Nantong is a city by Yangtze and yellow sea, so multiple fantastic materials from river and sea are good meals by cooking. Offer a good arrangement of meal，lodging,and outgoing can gaze the happiness of the guest.
