2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In China,there's a saying that "The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven." In light of this,I will recommend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China. So I want to goto lijiang with my parents and several years ago. I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the unparalleled beauty of Guilin.