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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33592
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
评语:

作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意。

用户练习作文:

Students should be careful with their money in daily life In my opinion, students should be careful with their money. It is a good habit. Many students need to depend on their parents for providing finance. People who always waste money do not how difficult to earn money and do not understand thier parents’ hardness. They only want to live a best lives for themselves. On the one hand, most of students are studying in the school, so they do not have ability to earn money. Parents need to pay for their education, training and lives. Nowadays, it is no easy for people to earn more money, especially for poor families. In many towns, the economy development is not better than one in centre cities, so many people who live in the small town only earn little moeny. It is difficult for them to provide their families. Therefore, students who are from small town should save money. On the other hand, using money without control will cause some problems. For example, some students like playing games online, they need much money on fees. If they do not have money, they would ask for money from their parents. When their parents do not give money to them,some students would hurt their own parents or other family members. What is worse, they would kill thier parents. All in all, wasting money is a bad behaviour. I think primary school teachers will teach students to be careful with money because saving money is a virtue. Every student should learn hoe to save money.

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