2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；文章层次较为清晰。

Dear Kevin, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks for what you have done for me when I was in difficulty. I have been encouraged by you to broaden my horizons with more activities to embrace this world, which is the best way for me to get a clear perspective of what I am hoping to do with my live and why. So I can gain competitive edge in my future career. You have told me that the skill to balance study and work contributes directly to enhancing our academic performance, job hunting and promotion in a system, which inspires me to improve my ability of time management. I also have learned from you that the cultivation of critical thinking ability was, is and remains to be an integral part in achieving one's personal accomplishment. So, I have learned how to think creatively and critically, which will put me in a favorable position in the job market. Thank you again for your help! You sincerely Tom