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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40868
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文中词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,高级词汇积累也做的很棒;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

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Over the decade the pace of change in people’s life has increased beyond our wildest expectations. Among the breakthroughs driving changes is the wide use of smart devices, which makes online shopping or learning possible and more convenient. The topic of online learning has constantly captured wide media attention. Undoutedly, there are both advantages and disadvantages when more and more people study online instead of attending school. On one hand, learning online will drive us to learn skill to balance study and work by choosing and deciding the timetable and course arrangement, which contributes directly to enhancing our academic performance, job hunting and promotion in a system.On the other hand, young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons with more activities to embrace this world, which may put youngsters in a favorable position in the job market. Unfortunately, online learning can not provide students enough opportunities to do so. Although the issues brought by online education can be addressed strategically within the proper policy adopted, I still believe that learing online alone can not make a full person. The public and government should adopt more comprehensive and reasonable perspective on this trend.

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