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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33580
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分87.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩。

用户练习作文:

Spending Should be Encouraged Consumption and saving are 2 different ways for people to deal with their income.Saving is important by providing more funds for big companies or perhaps considerable interest for depositors.But encouraging spending is more important for us at present.Here are the reasons. First,as is known in economics,consumption and productivity affect each other,with productivity the foundation of the 2 and consumption the motivation.High standard of consumption make developed a country is,the more it consumes.Take US for example,it is the largest consumer and at the same time the only super power on earth.If we all save without speding,all the manufactures will fall bankrupt and the whole economy will stagnate. Besides,promotion of productivity by increasing consumption will also help solve the problem of unemployment.To meet the consumers' needs,the producers sometimes have to enlarge their production scale or come up with new production departments.The consequence will inevitably be new job opportunities for numerous people.Once this problem is solved,then the social stability will be guaranteed.Moreover,those people,after getting new jobs,will earn enough money to buy what they need and this in turn contribute to the economic growth.In this way society benefits from consumption. Last but not least,as for the consumers,consumption leads to a better life.It is human nature to pursue a comfortable and convenient life.Even if we save money in our bank,our ultimate purpose is to spend it one day in further.Money will lose its basic function of exchange for goods if it remains in the bank.As our income has considerably increased nowadays,why not spend more of it to live more comfortably?After all,rising standard of living is an important aspect of social progress.We can spend as much as necessary within our present economic power.Even "spend today,pay tomorrow" is not such a bad idea,because it will motivate us to work harder to make ends meet. From the reasons mentioned above,we can see the significant role of spending in economy,society and also in people's lives.Now that we know it is so important,why not spend to benefit ourselves as well as so many others?

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