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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3374
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用。

用户练习作文:

Almost all of us heard the story “ Here Comes the Wolf “ when we were little kids. What we can learn from the story is that we must be honest. However, there’re lots of phenomena of dishonesty nowadays.   Being dishonest does great harm not only to other people but also to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for example. After drinking this kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, which badly affected their health. To our great relief, the producers got accused and punished for all the serious consequences in the end.   Having the reputation of being honest and reliable will make other people trust you, which will provide you many benefits and give you opportunities that others may not get. Being honest, you will find it easier to cooperate with others and people will be friendly to you and support you. In a sense, if life is a long journey, honesty will be the backpack that should be taken along all the way.   Let’s pick up our “ backpack “ —honesty, and start the wonderful journey!

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