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When we turn on the TV, we may be encounter advertising. Some people think that advertisements will bring people many benefits, however, others believe that commercials on TV are annoying. As far as I am concerned, I can positively point out that the major advantage of TV ads lies in its convenience. Advertising on TV can save us a lot of time. With the help of TV ads, it is unnecessary for us to spend much time to finding the goods we need from one shop to another. Moreover, advertising on TV can also save us much money. We can compare the similar products advertised on TV and finally get the best and cheapest one without stepping out of the door. Last but not least, some chiming music and vivid plot of TV ads are no less enjoyable than certain programs. As a result, advertising on TV plays an important role in people's daily life, from which we can conveniently get to know what products are available, how much they cost us and where to get them in a convenient way.
