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In modern society，the Internet has exerted profound influence on people’s life.As an indispensable part of our daily life，the Internet has made a huge difference in the world. The issue of whether the Internet is beneficial or harmful has aroused considerable communication，assist people in searching information and make people’s life become more convenient and easier.Others，however，argue that the Internet is liable to6leak personal information，have risks of systems destruction as well as contribute to indifference between people in real life. Weighing both the merits and demerits of Internet.I claimed that the benefits created by Internet far outweigh the shortcomings.The reason for my views mainly lie in the following three aspects.firstly，the Internet has shortened the distance between people.Nowadays，with the assistance of QQ,email，Facebook and other social network services.It has become very easily to establish global friendship.secondly,the Internet brings us rich and diversified information，which we can easily obtain through surfing online.Finally，the Internet provides us with better services.many services are available now such as online banking，online job seeking and online shopping. To sum up,taking into account all the relevant factors which affect contribute to the attitude，we may safely conclude that Internet facilitate our life to a great extent.
