2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。

As the picture illustrated, everyone is living in one huge web, which separated people form each other and they communicate with each other by surfing the Internent. It seems that the internent breaks the regional limit and by the Internent everyone no matter how far they are has the opportunity to chat with each other on line. In consequence, they are more likely to addict themselves to the virtual world rather than the real world. So even two neighbors they do not have much chance to talk with each other face to face resulting from the fact they spend too much time on computer. From my perspective, in no case sending messages in the Internent can replace the role communication placed. Eye contact, squeeze handshake and big smile can shorten the distance between two people and give each other the warm feeling, which can't be brought from the cold machine. Moreover, talking with people in the real world is more beneficial to people's mental and physical health.