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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
When we go into the gate of college ,this is the first step entering the society so we become more and more independent and there are a lot of problems which need be solved by our ,The first problem is how you solve your tuition . Let me recommend some ways which can solve the problems to you,first we can work during summer holiday or winter holiday ,second we can find a part-time job during we are in school ,third we can sell somethings on wechat ,because this is very popular around academics , maybe you have some better ways but what your choices are . I will choose the first way ,because working in summer holiday or winter holiday can enrich my experience and broaden my horizons ,the most important reason is that it can't influence my studying ,by contrast others can affect your studying
