小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Lily is my best friend.She is a beautiful gril.She is good at play table tennis.She works in Electronic company and do a good job.Her boss like her very much.We always shopping together.Today, it's a nice day.We are playing table tennis with my classmate in the graden. And we feel so happies.