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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇表达较丰富多样，高级词汇使用较熟练。
As is shown in the picture above, two men react in completely different ways when they encountered the same thing：A bottle fell off on the ground, the milk inside spilt out. One is optimistic, feeling grateful that he still has some milk while the other is sighing in great hopelessness “everthing has gone”. What the picture teaches us is that being optimistic or being pessimistic is an attitude to deal with the thing that is a challenge for us. If taking a pessimistic attitude to do it, people will keep a bad mood for a long period. What's worse, the thing will get worse and worse. On the contrary, if being optimistic with any kind of challenges, people will overcome it and get chances that negative people can not find from these challenges, then achieve their goals. So whenever we face the difficulties and challenges, we should be hopeful and optimistic, everthing will come in a good way.
