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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71616
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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It is well-known that abundant brilliant spots stand in China. Whereas, today the interesting place which I introduce to you is the most unforgettable, Canton Tower. Canton Tower, which people prefer to call it The Slim Waist, is the highest TV-tower in China and located in Haizhu Distict, Guangzhou Province. As a whole, there are five functional zones and a great variety of entertainment facilities, including outdoors sightseeing platform, ferris wheel, shopping mall and so on. What's most, lamplight concert of Flower Square is held in annual Spring Festival, which surrounds Canton Tower. With the colorful lights and the wonderful music on, citizens drown themselves in happiness.

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