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2012年专四作文真题:端午节

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:51浏览次数:6325
要求:
题目 The Dragon Boat Festival
说明 The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

文中高级词汇使用较少,但单词拼写做的很棒;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the important traditional festivals in Chinese. It is also called Duanwu Festival and Double Fifth. Chinese celebrate it to memorize the ancient famous people Qu Yuan on 5th May of lunar calendar every year. There are many traditional customs of The Dragon Boat Festival, like eating zongzi, drinking realgar wine, racing dragon boat and so on. Zongzi are pyramid-shaped dumplings made of glutinous rice, stuffed with different fillings and wrapped in bamboo or reed leaves. This traditional food is popular during the Dragon Boat Festival. Realgar wine is Chinese liquor seasoned with realgar. Dragon boat racing is a traditional pastime where crews of 22 seated in long, dragon-shaped boats race lengths of up to 2000m. But nowadays, different places have different rules of dragon boat racing. During Dragon Boat Festival, parents typically dress their children up with a sachet. They first sew little bags with colorful silk cloth, then fill the bags with perfumes or herbal medicines, and finally string them with silk thread. However, now there is no parents will do that. I have never recevied a sachet. The Dragon Boat has a long history and still popular among people. Moreover, many foreigners also celebrate this festival. I believe it will be an international festival.

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