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The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the important traditional festivals in Chinese. It is also called Duanwu Festival and Double Fifth. Chinese celebrate it to memorize the ancient famous people Qu Yuan on 5th May of lunar calendar every year. There are many traditional customs of The Dragon Boat Festival, like eating zongzi, drinking realgar wine, racing dragon boat and so on. Zongzi are pyramid-shaped dumplings made of glutinous rice, stuffed with different fillings and wrapped in bamboo or reed leaves. This traditional food is popular during the Dragon Boat Festival. Realgar wine is Chinese liquor seasoned with realgar. Dragon boat racing is a traditional pastime where crews of 22 seated in long, dragon-shaped boats race lengths of up to 2000m. But nowadays, different places have different rules of dragon boat racing. During Dragon Boat Festival, parents typically dress their children up with a sachet. They first sew little bags with colorful silk cloth, then fill the bags with perfumes or herbal medicines, and finally string them with silk thread. However, now there is no parents will do that. I have never recevied a sachet. The Dragon Boat has a long history and still popular among people. Moreover, many foreigners also celebrate this festival. I believe it will be an international festival.