作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
Properly dealing with the relationship between human beings and nature is a vital thing to our current and future development, especially to sustainable development.Now,there are two different opinions to improve the relationship,based on the background of human activities have negative effect on nature,including plants and animal species.One is they think that it is too late to amend or optimize the relationship,another holds an opposite idea to the topics. From my opinion to the topics, I prefer the latter to the former.though the relationship between human beings and nature has been rather worse,the situation could become more serious if we have nothing to do.It is not doubt that we have done some damages to our environment,for example,many species have truly left from our earth and we just know about their information of existing by some historical materials.In fact, more and more people have had an awakening consciousness on protecting the earth,they gradually know it is very vital for us to deal with the relationship because we just have a earth.our government and authorities have released many measures and policies of promoting the quality of environment. I believe our earth could become better and better as our people and authorities recognize the topics' importance,meanwhile do more positive things to improve the relationship.