能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;能够使用一些简单的从句,但需注意一些句子错误。
Contemporary more and more parent's tend to do everything for there child.It would lead to too many people can't finish everything for thereselves.There is a serious problem. In order to improve the negative condition,parents ought to start from oneself for every a little things.First of all,parents must let there child learn to independence.For instance,if child go to school requirements car instead of walking,parents should say "no" firmly and tell him or her can take the bus or walking oneself.There are many like this,parents must do the same as such.What‘s more,some parents arrange there child for a job,no matter they have ability whether or not. In conclusion,parents need to give there child plenty of change to do oneself things.Only to do it,child would be independent .