作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
the value of university life In many people's mind university like a paradise,in which we can enjoy years of happy life. Do many kinds of interesting things,except these,as college students,we also learn a great deal of knowledge and skills. In order to make some preparations for future life. To begin with,many courses in university provide a chance to broaden our sight and to strengthen our capacity. For example,we learn philosophy and politics make us have a clear opinion about the world. Furthermore,we can make a lot of friends on compus at college period. In this way,all of us can exchange our opinions about life or some other questions. It is beneficial to communicate culture and customs. Last but not least,university is a special place which can make students independent and mature. Unlike high school period,we are able to wash clothes by ourselves,self-study and solve some difficulties which we couldn't before. In a word,university life is so valuable that we can't waste. It is the gld age of life for many people. We should do our best to make it meaningful.In order that we have no regret for our life,and make us a useful and skillful people
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