2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用高级词汇；错误句子较少，可适当增加一些复杂句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

If my foreign friend goes to visit my hometown ,I will take her to see NanHu park. It is the best place that I love . It is also a good place in my town.At this park ,we can do many things. For example, we can walking along the river .The river is beautiful because of a lot of trees. We can also playing some games.There are many entainment facilities . We will have a happy day.What is more, I will take her to my home.My parents are kind to everyone.I believe they will get along well each other. In a word,I will try my best to make her happy in my town,though my town is small.