文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;从句使用不足,建议增加长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays TV has got into nearly every person's life. Most people spend their spare time watching TV programs. People like doing this because TV is a good thing in many respects. First,TV is a good source of information—news, programs and commercials timely and completely provide information about world affairs, domestic problems, sports events and business developments. Second, TV is an effective tool of education. Millions of students take the same TV lecture at the same time. No school can afford such a large classroom. Third, TV is a convenient means of entertainment. People can view plays, movies and art shows without