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2003年1月英语六级作文真题:关于诚实

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:23浏览次数:997
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 

2.诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
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可适当增加从句的使用;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量。

用户练习作文:

From the mass media and also with our own eyes, we know much dishonest behavior existed in our society. For example, businessmen sell fake products to cheat their customers; students copy other one's homework or download illicit paper from Internet to cheat their teachers; and even worse, there are medical person produce fake medicine harming the patients. Seeing our society is filled with so man y dishonest phenomena, I can't help asking myself what's wrong with us ? When we were very young we were taught the importance of being honest. I am sure everyone must still remember that story “wolf is coming”. In the story the child kept cheating other people that wolf was coming, but when the wolf really came, nobody trusted his words and he finally suffered his own dishonesty. Also w e have heard many stories that people benefit from their virtues of honesty. So since we have already known being honest benefit both ourselves and other people, why many of us are still dishonest? I hope everyone to bear in mind that being honest is the basic quality of human being and then we won't be afraid of any "wolf".

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