2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

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The Mid-Autumn Festival The Mid-Autumn Festival fell in the eighth month of 15th of our Chinese lunar calendar. For one of the traditional Chinese festivals, Which has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to go home for the celebration. The moon on the night that day looks brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. The beautiful moon in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addite to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends。