小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；作者词汇量有些小，要注意检查拼写错误。

I have a good friend whose name is afang, we are classmates, she is very cute with long hair, big eyes, sweet smile, and she is very nice. She often helps the other people who is in trouble, and she likes reading. We often talk about the content of some TV show, and we often play games together.