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文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
saving money when it comes to money，there is a old saying that money is not everything,but without money is nothing.Therefore,meney has become a comroversial issue on whether people should be careful with our daily liife.Different people hold different views.Personally,I'd like to save money. First,it's helpful to save money for people lest emergency happens.In fact,life is not alway smooth,which means people should prepare at all times.When facing an expected situation that need a large number of money,people can deliberately solve the problem if they have saved money before. Second,saving money doesn't mean that people can't use money.It's necessary to save money that people don't need to use in short period.Mesnwhile,people use money so as to buy something they in need.Finally,people achieve double wins Third,the money people saved can be used to do other things.People can do some investation.In this way,they can save more and more money. In short,it is necessary to save money for people.People should not live without responsibility,but just happy.And they need to save money to undertake the responsibility in their life
