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Private cars should put a pollution tax Recently, the possibility of putting a pollution tax on private cars and dependence on the emission levels, which has caused quite a stir among the public. The issue of whether private car owners pay for a ppllution tax or not has aroused considerable contraversy. Advocates of car-users paying for tax believe in its benefit that it can urge people to drive less or buy low-emission cars. This can exert a good effect on people's health, environment peotection and sustainable development. On the contrary, opponents on his side hold that it is difficult to carry out this policy. The car-making insdutry at home will be subject to heavily weaken by introducing pollution taxes. Whighing up of the strengths and weakenesses of that issue. In my perspective, private car owners should pay for the pollution taxes. First of all, carrying out the policy of "pollution tax" is benefit for environment. It is reported that nearly 40% of air pollution is caused by large-scale number of private cars. The excessive emission of carbon has given rise to global warmming. If private car owners payed for the pollution taxes, they would drive less and buy less in order to save money. What's more, private car owners paying for the pollution taxes can control the development of car-making industry without restraint. The quality of cars may be promoted in degree. To sum up, the policy of pollution taxes plays an important role in susbtainable development and environment protection.
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