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2006年专四作文真题:存钱

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:27浏览次数:1981
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题目 My Idea of Saving Money
说明 Recently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing, Guangzhou, Xi'an Chengdu, Shanghai, Wuhan, Nanjing, and Shenyang. The results have shown that 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow's money today is better, what do you think?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

Saving Money When it comes to money,there is an old saying that money is not everything,but without money is nothing.Therefore,money has become a controversial issue on whether people should be careful with our daily life.Different people hold different views.Personally,I'd like to set aside money. First,it's helpful to save money for people lest emergency happens.In reality,life is not always smooth,which means people should prepare at all times.When facing an expected situation that calls for a large amount of money,people can deliberately solve the problem if they have saved money before. Second,saving money doesn't mean that people can't deal with money.It's necessary to save money that people don't need to use in a short period.Meanwhile,people use money so as to buy something they really need.Finally,people achieve double wins Third,the money people set aside can be used to do other things.People can do some investigation.In this way,they can save more and more money. In short,it is necessary to set aside money for people.People should not live without responsibility,but just for fun.And they need to save money to undertake the responsibility in their life.

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