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Saving Money When it comes to money,there is an old saying that money is not everything,but without money is nothing.Therefore,money has become a controversial issue on whether people should be careful with our daily life.Different people hold different views.Personally,I'd like to set aside money. First,it's helpful to save money for people lest emergency happens.In reality,life is not always smooth,which means people should prepare at all times.When facing an expected situation that calls for a large amount of money,people can deliberately solve the problem if they have saved money before. Second,saving money doesn't mean that people can't deal with money.It's necessary to save money that people don't need to use in a short period.Meanwhile,people use money so as to buy something they really need.Finally,people achieve double wins Third,the money people set aside can be used to do other things.People can do some investigation.In this way,they can save more and more money. In short,it is necessary to set aside money for people.People should not live without responsibility,but just for fun.And they need to save money to undertake the responsibility in their life.