2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

Everyone needs friends. Nobody can live without friends. If someone’s life is without friends, no matter how much he has, he must be lonely. Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, people are not only making friends in their real life. They like knowing new friends on the internet. Some people are happy about that way of making friends, while some criticize it. Both of them have their own reasons. On the one hand, the supporter stands on the side that it is a better way to make more friends. As the friends online are from all over the world, people can have a chance to make friends with people in different places, instead of the people around themselves. Making friends in this way, they can broaden their vision, learning many new things and knowledge in an easy way. In other words, they can get self-improvement in their daily life. Why not go ahead with it? On the other hand, the protesters think it is unsafe to make friends online. As the network life is fictitious, people have no idea about what kind of the person they are talking to. It is very dangerous. If somebody wants to cheat another person, it is easy to make it. The newspaper also reports that there are some people died or get hurt while they are going to see their friend in the Internet. The latent danger of making friends online always exists. To sum up, as far as I am concerned, making friends online has advantages and disadvantages. People should not focus on the bad side and then give up a good chance. So I think I agree with making friends on the internet, but they still need to be careful, in case of being cheated.