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David how are you? my name is li hua. i am a middles school student.i am living in shanghai now.i like collecting stamps.after school,i often play football or do some other sorts.what's more, i like english very much and i can sing a few english songs.by the way, some of my classmates want to have their pen friends, too. can you help us? I haven't been to any foreign countries yet, so i hope i'll visit your county soon.