2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦164:我的朋友

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

David： How are you? My name is Li Hua. I am a student in middle school. I am living in Shanghai now. I like collecting stamps. After school, I often play football or do some other sports. What's more, I like English very much and I can sing a few English songs. By the way, some of my classmates want to have their pen friends, too. Can you help us? I haven't been to any foreign countries yet, so I will hope to visit your county soon. Yours Li Hua