2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 词数100左右
文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些高级词汇;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
There are one-second students think their homework is too much and their stress is too heavy. We should talk over the question about homework with our teachers. And we can listen to some songs to relax when we have finished some homework. Thirty percent of students think their parents are too strict to them. They can discuss the problem with their parents. It can make the children and their parents understand each other. One-fifth of students think the activities are not enough so that they don't have a healthy body. They can tell the problem to school to make their school have more activities. And they can also strong their bodies in these activities.