2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 词数100左右
可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
There are one-second students think their homework is too much and their stress is too heavy. We should talk over the question about homework with our teachers and we can listen to some songs to relax when we have finished some homework. Thirty percent of students think their parents are too strict to them. They can discuss the problem with their parents. It can make the children and their parents understand each other. There are one-fifth of students think the activities are not enough so that they don't have a healthy body. They can tell the problem to school to make their school have more activities and they can also make their bodies more stronger in these activities.