2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 词数100左右
词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
One-second students think their homework is too much and their stress is too heavy. We should talk over the question about homework with our teachers and we can listen to some songs to relax when we have finished some homework. Thirty percent of students think their parents are too strict to them. They can discuss the problem with their parents. It can make the children and their parents understand each other. One-fifth of students think the activities are not enough so that they don't have a healthy body. They can tell the problem to school to make their school have more activities and they can also make their bodies more stronger in these activities.