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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文中词汇使用较丰富，高级词汇使用要加强。
I was born in HangZhou, and it is such a beautiful city in my mind. If you want to visit my hometown one day, I'd like to be your tour guide. The first place we go must be the West Lake, which is famous for its fantastic scenery all over the world.We can go around to feel the wind blows and appreciate the gorgeous sight. Then, Lingyin Temple is also a great place to take a visit. Because a sad and beautiful love story Legend of the White Snake is happened there, which moved so many people.And there are many worthy places to visit, such as Wu town, Hefang Street and so on. What's more, many special foods are also an indispensable part of your journey. Finally, I wish you will have a good day here with me, and I believe that you will like my hometown as you experience the life here.
