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全文结构较为严谨；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。
The importance of keeping a good mood People in modern society live under a lot of pressure,from eduction,career,or family. So it is very inportant for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. keeping a good mood not only can do good for there healthy, and also can bring active effects on there life . In a conclusion , keeing a good mood is really important for people. In the modren society , people has sufftered too much pressure,from natural environment， society ,education , relationships with others, career, family, or from other people. we faced too much diffculities, sadness from baby to grow. So it is improtant for us to have a good mood all the time in that way we can handle all the things. And also keep a good mood is good for our body ,if you keep a bad mood , it will badly do harm to your health. In other way , keep a good mood also can suprise you . when you have a good mood ,you can use a postive way to handle things when you are facing pressure. and have a good mood can make you more hardworing in many asprcts. A proverb says smell can make you youger more than ten years. so keep a good mood is really important. what i supposed is that peole should have a postive mood when they face everything. and keep a good mood in darily life because it is a healthy way for people under preesures.
