2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦164:我的朋友

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构不严谨。

David: Hi, my name is Li Hua. I am a student in middle school. I live in Shanghai. I like collecting stamps and many sports such as football. I can also sing a lot of English songs because I am interested in English. I want to go to England to improve my english. Except that,a lot of my classmates want to find their penfriend. Can you help them? Yours Li Hua