2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦164:我的朋友

简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

David: My name is Li Hua. I am a student in middle school. I live in Shanghai. I like collecting stamps and many sports such as football. I can also sing a lot of English songs because I am interested in English. I want to go to England to improve my English. Except that, a lot of my classmates want to have their penfriend, too. Can you do them a favour? I hope to receive your letter at an early date.