正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
David How are you? My name is Li Hua. I am a middles school student. I am living in Shanghai now. I like collecting stamps. After school, I often play football or do some other sports. What's more, I like English very much and I can sing a few English songs. By the way, some of my classmates want to have their pen friends, too. Can you help us? I haven't been to any foreign countries yet, so I hope I'll visit your county soon.